Post by Spectrum on Jun 3, 2004 11:44:27 GMT -5
Decided it's high time I make my dream of Brother Bear 2 come magneficently true through the words of Spectrue!....Rhyme....Rhyme...everytime... 
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j/k...
Anyway. here we go...
The path of human is a long one, but for a bear, it seems endless. Since the journey Kenai overtook with the becoming of a man by transforming into a bear, there has been nothing but hard ships upon the young lad. He struggles to take care of his little brother, Koda, whom he decided to be with after his lessons of looking through another's eyes. Kenai finds many of the positive things of life more enjoyable though, then to take care of a wound of Koda's foot, or make him feel better when it comes to the loss of his mother. Kenai brings happiness to Koda so he may live a good life. He, of all bears, is indeed the best big brother of the woods, and many of his fun times and bad times with Koda teach him new things, more things for discovery. But as with all living things of our world, small things become big, as Kenai's little brother has become a really big,,,,
<cue Kenai talking to Koda loudly>
"PAIN IN THE FUR!!!"
It was yet another day when Kenai was giving one of his brother lectures to Koda, Koda not listening as well.
"You really did it this time, Koda. You completely took a wrong turn when you met that hunter! Do you know how dangerous it is these days now? The humans are becoming more serious about their work of...of, of SPORT, as they say! Their hunting us bears for no particular reason at all, and you just go up and meet one?! This is insane..."
Along the way of Kenai belittling Koda, Koda mocks his big brother while his back is turned.
"Blah, blah, blah! I know, Kenai, you told me to stay away, but this was different, I'm telling you! I know how to react with hunters! I'm the one who told you that when you-"
Kenai interupted.
"No, don't even go there, Koda. Not even once. That was the past, this is the present. And you won't have any future if you don't even listen to what I'm telling right now."
Koda snarled.
"Future? Give me a break, Kenai! You've been hard on me ever since that encounter with the..."
Koda turned around and saw Rutt gawking at almost grown cub.
"What's up, eh? What's all the bickerin' about?"
Tuke stood beside Rutt.
"Yea, eh. What's goin on, smallish bear?"
Koda snorted.
"I'm not small anymore! How many times do I have to tell you guys! Either you call me Koda or don't call me at all! Not, kid, not smallish bear, not cub, just, Ko----DA!!! KODA! Don't you get it! and as for what's goin on, you mine's well ask Kenai, he's the one who always breathing down my neck, 'these days'!
Kenai looked baffled and glared at Koda.
"Look Koda, it's all just for good intentions. I don't want you to get hurt..."
Koda glared right back.
"Yea, well, if you weren't my brother, I'd claw you up right now, so you wouldn't '''hurt''' me the way you have been recently! I wish you would just get stuck in a trap and not be able to come out. PERIOD!
Kenai wacked Koda with his paw in his face.
"I don't understand Koda. What is your problem?! All I do for you, is only for you, YOU, YOU, YOU!"
Koda growled and rubbed his face.
"Well, do me a favor, Kenai. Do this, for 'me' as you say. Give me some more freedom!"
Koda ran toward the forest deep into the trees, leaving Kenai flabbergasted in the open forest area, with the two moose, comprehending what just happened.
"I sense conflict, eh..." Rutt pushed himself into an indian stance and made 'ooooo-ms' sounds.
Tuke nodded "Yea, eh. I think you ought to,"
"Ought to, what?!" Kenai yelled at Tuke. "Ought to let him go off and be shot with an arrow?! Stuck with a knife!? Perhaps be stuck in a hole for all eternity? Sure, yea, I'll let him do that. I"ll let him have freedom, and as for his will to do anything, yea, I'll let him fly off a tree, for all I care. All I want to do is take care of the only thing I have right now in this world. If he's gone, I'm basically gone, and nothing will change that!"
Kenai roared and moaned and walked away deep into the oposite direction of the woods.
"And tell the kid he ain't gunna be called Ko-DUH unless he learns some respect!" Kenai yells back.
The two moose lurch towards eachother.
"I give them three hours, eh."
"No way, eh! They have to last more than a day or so!"
"Sure, either way, they'll be back, eh.."
"Yea, if they ever get their fur cooled off, eh."
The moose walked away bickering in the woods as well, about the matter, than settled on the topic of who can eat the most grass without burpin up...
What do you guys think? good? So far? Too much conflict? What!? TELL ME!!!
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j/k...
Anyway. here we go...
The path of human is a long one, but for a bear, it seems endless. Since the journey Kenai overtook with the becoming of a man by transforming into a bear, there has been nothing but hard ships upon the young lad. He struggles to take care of his little brother, Koda, whom he decided to be with after his lessons of looking through another's eyes. Kenai finds many of the positive things of life more enjoyable though, then to take care of a wound of Koda's foot, or make him feel better when it comes to the loss of his mother. Kenai brings happiness to Koda so he may live a good life. He, of all bears, is indeed the best big brother of the woods, and many of his fun times and bad times with Koda teach him new things, more things for discovery. But as with all living things of our world, small things become big, as Kenai's little brother has become a really big,,,,
<cue Kenai talking to Koda loudly>
"PAIN IN THE FUR!!!"
It was yet another day when Kenai was giving one of his brother lectures to Koda, Koda not listening as well.
"You really did it this time, Koda. You completely took a wrong turn when you met that hunter! Do you know how dangerous it is these days now? The humans are becoming more serious about their work of...of, of SPORT, as they say! Their hunting us bears for no particular reason at all, and you just go up and meet one?! This is insane..."
Along the way of Kenai belittling Koda, Koda mocks his big brother while his back is turned.
"Blah, blah, blah! I know, Kenai, you told me to stay away, but this was different, I'm telling you! I know how to react with hunters! I'm the one who told you that when you-"
Kenai interupted.
"No, don't even go there, Koda. Not even once. That was the past, this is the present. And you won't have any future if you don't even listen to what I'm telling right now."
Koda snarled.
"Future? Give me a break, Kenai! You've been hard on me ever since that encounter with the..."
Koda turned around and saw Rutt gawking at almost grown cub.
"What's up, eh? What's all the bickerin' about?"
Tuke stood beside Rutt.
"Yea, eh. What's goin on, smallish bear?"
Koda snorted.
"I'm not small anymore! How many times do I have to tell you guys! Either you call me Koda or don't call me at all! Not, kid, not smallish bear, not cub, just, Ko----DA!!! KODA! Don't you get it! and as for what's goin on, you mine's well ask Kenai, he's the one who always breathing down my neck, 'these days'!
Kenai looked baffled and glared at Koda.
"Look Koda, it's all just for good intentions. I don't want you to get hurt..."
Koda glared right back.
"Yea, well, if you weren't my brother, I'd claw you up right now, so you wouldn't '''hurt''' me the way you have been recently! I wish you would just get stuck in a trap and not be able to come out. PERIOD!
Kenai wacked Koda with his paw in his face.
"I don't understand Koda. What is your problem?! All I do for you, is only for you, YOU, YOU, YOU!"
Koda growled and rubbed his face.
"Well, do me a favor, Kenai. Do this, for 'me' as you say. Give me some more freedom!"
Koda ran toward the forest deep into the trees, leaving Kenai flabbergasted in the open forest area, with the two moose, comprehending what just happened.
"I sense conflict, eh..." Rutt pushed himself into an indian stance and made 'ooooo-ms' sounds.
Tuke nodded "Yea, eh. I think you ought to,"
"Ought to, what?!" Kenai yelled at Tuke. "Ought to let him go off and be shot with an arrow?! Stuck with a knife!? Perhaps be stuck in a hole for all eternity? Sure, yea, I'll let him do that. I"ll let him have freedom, and as for his will to do anything, yea, I'll let him fly off a tree, for all I care. All I want to do is take care of the only thing I have right now in this world. If he's gone, I'm basically gone, and nothing will change that!"
Kenai roared and moaned and walked away deep into the oposite direction of the woods.
"And tell the kid he ain't gunna be called Ko-DUH unless he learns some respect!" Kenai yells back.
The two moose lurch towards eachother.
"I give them three hours, eh."
"No way, eh! They have to last more than a day or so!"
"Sure, either way, they'll be back, eh.."
"Yea, if they ever get their fur cooled off, eh."
The moose walked away bickering in the woods as well, about the matter, than settled on the topic of who can eat the most grass without burpin up...
What do you guys think? good? So far? Too much conflict? What!? TELL ME!!!
who knows. I'll work on it now.
But, I also have an announcement to make on the general board so...
